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Hold On

I heard you crying last night
Did you stop trying last night?
You scream there is nothing left
You say there is nothing inside

You used to fly up so high
But you fell to pieces in the sky
You let go of your faith
And threw away your dreams
Try and find something left for us

I'll turn the lights out
Sleep for tonight
I have to leave,
So goodbye
You have to face this alone
You need to build your strength
You lost faith in me
And gave up
You know there is nothing
Left of us

You say it's too late
And nothing hurts
The feelings will come
And some will burn
But some will heal
If you keep strong
You won't hurt anymore

You can lay in the grass
And feel the sun
If you'll just wait for one
Keep shining darling
It's never too late
To turn your life around
Even if only for a day
You can reinvent yourself
And become someone new
Live a different life
And dry off your eyes

Just keep smiling,
I promise you it's not all gone
There is light at the end
All you have to do is hold on
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Life is hard and it sucks most of the time. However, whenever you need to, you can always change it your life. Just hold on.
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Cosmic--Chaos Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is such an encouraging poem. Thank you for writing it :) Lots of others would appreciate it, too.
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brandXnewXeyesX Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Kittie-Kayy Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student Writer
This is lovely. I've reached this exact moment in my life, this poem echos the words someone dear has told me. Simply wonderful.
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dragondave10 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just what I feel like! Both ends of the hold on.
Nice use though. Two meanings in one. Way to go. *claps hands*
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Sparia Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Great job!
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writingpoetryforlife Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
amazing
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BlazeJuliaNightfury Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student Writer
This is really good, I needed to read something like this right about now. keep up the awsome work BNE (brandXnewXeyesX)
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brandXnewXeyesX Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student Writer
:D Thank you so much! I will!
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BlazeJuliaNightfury Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student Writer
:D
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frozen-fyre Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
this is my favorite poem ever... :heart:
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