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13.
I'm in a pretend world
With stars and tears
I'm in a happy place
Free of fears
I want to know how it ends
I just want to be
I just want to feel you
Crawl all over me
I just want to lie here
Next to you
Can I just die here next to you?
Please just let me be all over you
I just want to feel your breath
And see your soul
I want feel your heart on my mine
I want to feel our fingers intertwined
Can I rip you open—
And feel you inside?
Can I lie here next you?
Can I chain you to the bed?
Can I be with you forever?
Can we both be happy in this land?
Can we just die here, forever, hand-in-hand?
I'm in a pretend world
With stars and tears
I'm in a happy place
Free of fears
I want to know how it ends
I just want to be
I just want to feel you
Crawl all over me
I just want to lie here
Next to you
Can I just die here next to you?
Please just let me be all over you
I just want to feel your breath
And see your soul
I want feel your heart on my mine
I want to feel our fingers intertwined
Can I rip you open—
And feel you inside?
Can I lie here next you?
Can I chain you to the bed?
Can I be with you forever?
Can we both be happy in this land?
Can we just die here, forever, hand-in-hand?
There isn't much to say about this one. I guess this one is a little more...sexual than any of the other ones I've ever written, still, this is one of my favorite poems I've done. I hope you enjoy it.
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So very sweet! So sensual.. *grin* Nicely done!